2011.01.08雅思大作文第一時間評析
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小編： 70【寫作題目】
Some people think that robots are very important to the future development, while others think that robots would cause a negative effect on the society. Discuss both point of views and state your opinion.
【題目翻譯】
有人認為機器人對未來發(fā)展很有用，然而另一些人認為機器人對社會有負面影響。討論雙方觀點并陳述你的觀點。
【話題分類與題型】
本題為舊題。屬于科技類話題。題型為雙邊討論型。
【話題評價】
此題難度不大，屬大家熟悉的科技類話題，與09年3月20日的話題屬相似話題，都可抽象歸納為“科技究竟是福還是禍”類話題。雅思歷史上曾考過很多類似題目，比如手機利弊、電視利弊、電腦利弊、飛機利弊以及機器和機器人利弊等。
【類似真題】
Intelligent machines such as robots are wildly applied to take the place of
human beings. Please discuss the advantages and disadvantages.
In today's society, more and more work is done by machines. DO you think the
positive effects of the development outweigh the negative effects on
individuals and society?（2010.03.20）
【結(jié)構(gòu)與思路】
建議采用平衡式論證結(jié)構(gòu)，先說明機器人改變?nèi)祟惿?，帶給人類福音；同時機器人的廣泛
使用也會引發(fā)一系列社會問題。結(jié)論：要合理利用機器人，注意趨利避害。
Introduction：
機器人，也被稱為“人工智能”，在現(xiàn)代技術(shù)發(fā)達的世界里已不是什么新鮮事。（Robots,also known as "artificial intelligence",are nothing new in today's modern technological world.）
他們由人類設(shè)計，去幫助人完成一些被看做煩人、無聊甚至是危險的工作,因此也受到世界上一些人的歡迎。（They are designed by human beings to assit in performing some activities that are considered tiresome and boring and at times risky and thereby welcomed by some people around the world.)
然而，盡管機器人“多才多藝”，但是我們也不應(yīng)對機器人所帶來的風(fēng)險視而不見。(Versatile as robots may prove，however，we should not turn a blind eye to the risks they may bring about.)
Body 1: 平衡段一
【總論點】機器人對工人，工業(yè)和國家發(fā)展帶來許多好處，這是無可辯駁的事實。
(It is an incontrovertible fact that robots offer specific benefits to workers,industries and countries. )
【支持句1】如果引入正確，工業(yè)機器人能把工人從骯臟、單調(diào)、危險和繁重的體力勞動中解放出來，從而提高他們的生活質(zhì)量。 (If introduced correctly, industrial robots can improve the quality of life by freeing workers from dirty,boring,dangerous and heavy labour.)
【支持句2】與此同時，由于機器人能夠日夜不懈奮斗在裝配線上并且不出現(xiàn)失誤, 因此可以大大減少產(chǎn)品成本,從而推動整個制造業(yè)的發(fā)展。(Meanwhile, as robots can work tirelessly night and day on an assembly line without an loss in performance, they can greatly reduce the costs of manufactured goods, thus giving renewed impetus to the advancement of the whole manufacturing industry.)
【支持句3】由于豐厚的產(chǎn)業(yè)利潤，有效使用機器人的國家會在全球市場上有巨大經(jīng)濟優(yōu)勢。尤其在日本，機器人產(chǎn)業(yè)已蓬勃發(fā)展，每年為日本經(jīng)濟發(fā)展貢獻數(shù)十億日元。(As a result of these tremendous industrial profits, countries that effectively utilise robots tend to have huge economic advantages on the global market.This is particularly evident in Japan, where the robot industry has flourished and contributs billions of yen a year to the Japan's economy.)
Body 2: 平衡段二
【總論點】盡管機器人能造福人類，但并不意味著機器人不會給社會帶來任何麻煩。
(Notwithstanding the tremendous benefits for humanity , it does not automatically mean that robots will not cause any trouble to society.)
【分支觀點1】社會必須面臨的一個挑戰(zhàn)是中低端工人的大規(guī)模裁員問題。 (A challenge has to face is large-scale of redundancies of lower and middle level workers.)
【解釋】(As robots can be applied to take the place of human beings, individuals with limited knowledge and skills are more likely to be kicked out, which may cause a high level of unemployment in society.)
【分支觀點2】機器人帶來的另一個缺點是他們對變數(shù)的有限處理能力。(Another potential demerit posed by robots is their limited ability to cope with variables.)
【解釋】it is a truth universally acknowledged that we are now living in a society full of uncertainties. A person can adapt to these variables, but it is more difficult and expensive for a robot to deal with these.For instance,robots can be good-for-nothing when the electronic circuit breaks during the operation.
Conclusion:
沒有工具和機器是完美的，機器人也是一樣。我們在使用時機器人時，要注意其產(chǎn)生的負面影響。(By way of conclusion, there are no perfect tools or machines in the world and these applied to robots as well. When utilising them, we should stay alert to the negative influence robots may bring about.)
