雅思1月8日作文整體分析
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小編： 51Task 1:
【作文簡介】
兩幅Pie chart
對比bachlor和PHD 2003的就業(yè)情況
【核心詞匯】：employment /unempolyment/ futher study combation of study and work/full-time employment overseas
注意：特定的數(shù)字可以采取多樣性的表達，如25%=a quarter of, 50%=half of
【結(jié)構(gòu)簡析】
兩個圖表的數(shù)據(jù)有密切的關(guān)系。四段式寫法。
第一段: 總體介紹圖表情況。
主體二段、三段：分別描述兩幅圖表。
本題屬于我講的典型題目3：同時期不同對象之間進行比較。
第四段:對兩個圖表中的數(shù)據(jù)進行比較.
（北京 楊凡老師）
Task 2:
【作文題目】
Someone think that robots are very important to humans' future development, others thought that they are dangerous and have negative effects on society. Discuss both sides and give your opinion?
【題目翻譯】
有的人認(rèn)為機器人對于人類的未來很重要，有人認(rèn)為機器人很危險，對于社會有負面影響，討論兩方觀點，給出你的意見。
【考題評價】
“舊題新編”已經(jīng)成為了現(xiàn)在雅思寫作命題的一大趨勢，而單純地重復(fù)之前的老話題在目前的考試中已經(jīng)越來越少。但是考生在寫這類考題的時候絕對不能把老題目的論點全部用于新話題中。此題實際上是舊題的重現(xiàn)，因此大家一定要高度重視舊題的重現(xiàn)的可能性?？萍碱愒掝}, 題型為Argumentation.和計算機,互聯(lián)網(wǎng),飛機,太空探索等題目都很相像.
【參考觀點】
北京 李婉老師
機器人優(yōu)點之一：機器人可以代替人類做一些重復(fù)的repetitive, 笨拙的awkward，精密的precise工作，因此可以節(jié)約大量的勞動力labour force，而且可以大大提高生產(chǎn)效率greatly enhance working efficiency。因此在很多勞動密集型產(chǎn)業(yè)labour-intensive industry諸如汽車制造業(yè)automobile manufacturing industry，包裝業(yè)packaging industry，電子產(chǎn)品制造業(yè)electronics industry中得到了普遍的應(yīng)用be widely applied.
機器人的優(yōu)點之二：機器人可以代替人類從事危險的工作perilous work，諸如太空研究space research， 火山探險volcano exploration。此外，機器人不像人類那樣需要休息，所以可以24小時工作work around the clock.
機器人的缺點：人類對機器人的過度依賴overreliance on robots有很大的風(fēng)險，因為一旦機器人出故障break down比如電路問題short circuit和程序故障program failure，那么就有可能給人來帶來麻煩。如果利用不當(dāng)或者被一些弗蘭肯斯坦Frankenstein式的科學(xué)怪人濫用abuse，甚至?xí)o人來帶來毀滅性的災(zāi)難catastrophic disaster.
【寫作范文1】
北京 李靜老師
Technology develops by leaps and bounds, which gives rise to various high-tech products like robots. As to the artificial intelligence, people hold divergent views whether it is a blessing or a curse for human beings. As far as I am concerned, the advent of robots has both merits and demerits.
There is no denying that robots can enhance the work efficiency and relieve people from the heavy work. It is reported that robots can perform some risky and repetitive tasks for human being. For example, in some countries, robots can work in the factories, hospitals and shops to replace the human labor. Therefore, people can have more leisure time. What is more, it is a fresh idea that robots can take good care of the senior citizens in the aging society, which is a growing tendency in many countries.
However, it must be admitted that robots are never without the downsides. For one thing, people tend to be over dependent on the work of the robots, which leads to people’s deteriorating creativity, imagination and flexibility both in work and life. For another, with more robots coming into the work force, more people may become unemployed and it is difficult for people to make a living in this sense. In the more competitive world, robots make the job hunting tougher than before.
From above, we can come to the conclusion that robots indeed make it possible for people to achieve the high efficiency and have helpers in work and life. But they create the new problems for human beings as well. On balance, robots present the chances and new challenges in reality. What we should consider is that we can accept the advantages of robots while staying away from the drawbacks.
【寫作范文2】
北京 于光老師
In the first instance, robot can do lots of jobs for human beings, which saves the labor force to be engaged in other aspects. With the widening use of robots, more and more automated machines have replaced human labor. Computer manages our banks and the tickets at the airport are issued by machine-robot. In addition, the robots have entered offices, departments and houses to help people to work smarter and smarter and to enjoy longer and longer leisure hours in their own homes. The computerization certainly relieves human beings from heavy labors.
However, each coin has its two sides. Intelligent machine-robot in the future to replace human being’s work has its obvious dangers. Firstly, too many machine-robots will make many workers out of work. A danger arises upon use of more machines, the more workers will be unemployed and lower our living standard will become.
Secondly, what’s worse, being lenient in robots will make them become the most advanced creature in the world. It has a high probability that robots will dominate our world just like what is shown in the scientific movie.
