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小編：環(huán)小影 504寫(xiě)作總是無(wú)話可說(shuō)or“廢話”滿篇？如何解決看這篇！在多年授課的過(guò)程中，我們經(jīng)常發(fā)現(xiàn)，很多學(xué)生可能平時(shí)在家里寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候都感覺(jué)自己的狀態(tài)不錯(cuò)，為什么考試的時(shí)候卻會(huì)“掉鏈子”？
每當(dāng)歸納原因的時(shí)候，就會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)，最重要的原因就是在考試的時(shí)候想不出來(lái)很好的點(diǎn)。話說(shuō)到一半就沒(méi)話說(shuō)了，或者是隨便舉例子論述。
今天，Shane老師將會(huì)跟大家分享如何思考才能“下筆如有神”，閑話少敘，我們直接上干貨！
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. Students are more interested in politics today than in the past.
很多同學(xué)在拿到一套題的時(shí)候，總想說(shuō)一句話“怎么還有這樣的題？？？”
如果還在想這個(gè)，那就太不專業(yè)了，在思考問(wèn)題的時(shí)候可能就要花上三四分鐘，到最后越想越糟糕，越寫(xiě)越難受。這就是很多小伙伴們最頭疼的環(huán)節(jié)-寫(xiě)作前應(yīng)該如何構(gòu)思。
Shane老師在這里給大家介紹一個(gè)“兩邊思考”的方法——一個(gè)正觀點(diǎn)，一個(gè)反觀點(diǎn)（最省時(shí)間，每個(gè)都說(shuō)一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，一個(gè)當(dāng)主體，一個(gè)當(dāng)讓步）
首先，我們要果斷選擇。我們?cè)谒伎嫉臅r(shí)候，當(dāng)發(fā)現(xiàn)自己沒(méi)有任何一方自己特別想選，或者特別遲疑時(shí)，就直接選擇第一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)當(dāng)做自己的主觀點(diǎn)。
在這道題里就是“Students are more interested in politics today than in the past.” 然后再去想原因就會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)會(huì)順暢很多。
當(dāng)選擇了一個(gè)立場(chǎng)，但是還想不出來(lái)接下來(lái)該寫(xiě)什么時(shí)，我們就要反復(fù)重復(fù)。
重復(fù)什么？就是在腦海里重復(fù)“現(xiàn)在的學(xué)生要比之前更加關(guān)注政治了，因?yàn)?..” 每次給自己一個(gè)背景去思考，總比在大腦里空白的去想“到底有什么？”要強(qiáng)上許多，反復(fù)重復(fù)，一直到自己想到為止。
終于，我們想好了一個(gè)topic sentence?！皌he policies between countries have a great influence on the international student community”
之后我們要做的事情是想另一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)的一個(gè)topic sentence，也就是學(xué)生不感興趣政治，因?yàn)椤皩W(xué)生們忙于學(xué)習(xí)，無(wú)暇關(guān)注政治的信息”
這樣我們這篇文章的龍骨就出來(lái)了——
中心觀點(diǎn)（thesis statement）
I think students are becoming more and more interested in politics now as the world is changing so rapidly.
第一個(gè)body 段：
To begin with, the policies between countries have a great influence on the international student community.
讓步段：
There is no denying that it is difficult for students, under the pressure of busy studies, to be distracted by political messages.
我們?cè)趯?xiě)topic sentence 的時(shí)候，必須要注意它和自己的中心論點(diǎn)有沒(méi)有直接的因果關(guān)系。寫(xiě)完的句子必須double check！?。?/span>
我們來(lái)試一試。“學(xué)生們現(xiàn)在更加感興趣于政治了，因?yàn)楝F(xiàn)在的政治對(duì)留學(xué)生的影響非常大”如果這個(gè)邏輯算得上通順，那這個(gè)topic sentence就過(guò)關(guān)了。
為什么我會(huì)推薦“兩邊觀點(diǎn)”這個(gè)方法？
正是因?yàn)檫@樣可以快速構(gòu)建出兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn)。按照這個(gè)方法進(jìn)行大量練習(xí)，練熟了之后，可以再加一個(gè)主體段觀點(diǎn)，總體文章可以構(gòu)成“兩正一反”的類型，結(jié)構(gòu)會(huì)清晰許多。
紙上談兵不如動(dòng)手實(shí)踐！大家可以嘗試用這個(gè)龍骨練習(xí)一下這一篇文章，看看寫(xiě)作過(guò)程會(huì)不會(huì)流暢許多呢？
以下是Shane老師寫(xiě)的例文，大家可以參考閱讀~
Scientific discoveries should be shared by all countries worldwide, and no government should keep them secret.The development of science and technology has always been one of the key elements of world development. Scientists often make new discoveries in their daily research, and whether these new discoveries should be shared with the world is a hotly debated topic. In my opinion, I believe that scientific discoveries should be shared around the world.
First of all, sharing research results allows more scientists around the world to carry out further research. Many of the world's scientific discoveries are presented to the public for the first time in the form of papers. Because these technologies are only discovered by a scientist or a team, many of their drawbacks and potential dangers have not been thoroughly studied, which contains some areas that need to be improved. If a scientific achievement is shared in a timely manner, many scientists around the world can carry out more in-depth research on this topic, so that the scientific achievement can better serve everyone. There is no denying that sharing all research results can lead to some problems, such as some scientific findings with very significant safety implications. The dangers of finding and sharing a chemical or nuclear material that could be used to make a weapon are enormous, and could pose a threat to the entire world if it were acquired by malicious individuals. However, the scientific community, as well as governments around the world, are very cautious about the development of dangerous projects. Potentially destructive technologies have long been the core secrets of many countries. Furthermore, no matter the research result is a academic paper or in any other different forms, it can only be read by people with considerable academic level. Scientists in the world are generally more righteous, and what they are doing is always in a better way to create more welfare, so this issue does not need to worry too much. In general, sharing the scientific discoveries around the world would be very beneficial, because sharing can lead to further improvement of related technologies. Beyond that, the dangers and pitfalls of sharing technology are minimal.
